Бичсэн Hector Vargas
20-06-2008 22:42,
Mr.
Hey, great looking site. I would like to make a critical comment hoping to help you improve it. There is a need of revising your English. Generally, it is fine and easy to understand, but needs a little polishing. Great site must have great wording. 
For instance: What is life like in....? is better than what you have. Just delete the "look" 
 
I am trying to get my own site started and would like to be able to get one as good looking as yours. 
 
Sincerely 
 
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